Today, many companies and businesses are involved in sports. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, the question of whether many commercial organizations participate in sports activities has been receiving a great deal of public attention in recent years. Although this trend is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify these.
There are a whole host of reasons why sports should not be involved by businesses. Firstly, since the inherently nature of sports is not commerce. In fact, besides incomes from team, most players would also earn money from sponsors through advertising, which makes them not concentrate on their main task. Secondly, the degree of enterprise intervention in the sports can cause gambling. By having a bet on a game, it is more likely for owners to control the styles of players to have access to the desired results.
Nevertheless, other pros should be taken into account for this issue. It is believed that the contribution of companies helps to decrease a burden to government. A big sum of money would be required to train an amateur to a professional, therefore, the financial aids deriving from businesses offer players the best condition to maximize their abilities Furthermore, with the assistance of companies, sports clubs would be more popular in entertainment industry. As a result, there would be more fans coming to the stadium, which helps team get more legal profits.
In conclusion, the advantages of this trend will be far more significant. By considering all the pros and cons of the involvement of commercial corporations, government should allow businesses to assist finance in the development of this industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In recent years, the question of whether many commercial organizations participa...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...ill justify these. There are a whole host of reasons why sports should not be inv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03997207539 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61568627451 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9372843602 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12814929924 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471857300189 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531450635139 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894599597961 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709289674496 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.