Some people argue that media should focus more on ordinary people instead of making paparazzi to scrutinize celebrities's life. Personally, I partly agree with this idea.
On the one hand, the media need to find some hottest and latest news about famous people to attract viewers. Simply because the trend of almost people prefer to read, listen a new or a radio talk about a sensational information about celebrities to find a daily story of unknown people. For example,people, especially young generations, always enjoy the news relate to their idols. Moreover, these media companies need fund to maintain their active like: paying salaries for staffs, paying tax,... The more people follow, the more money they can earn.
On the other hand, It is really necessary to communicate news about good activities of normal people. For instance, nowadays the main topic of all media that people care most is about Virus Corona as well as encouragement to doctors against it. From that example, as can be seen, the media is the one of best ways to convey good messages. Besides, with the proliferation of the media, some activities with high quality will be spread faster, that means society make fast progress and the reputation of media will get a higher rate in the future.
In conclusion, reporting and writing about celebrities and ordinary people is important and inevitable. I believe that news from the media is always essential for people to broaden their horizon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...e influence of celebrities’ news on the general public is inevitable; however; I believe it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55670103093 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08233439135 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615120274914 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9018578073 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.7 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5 7.06120827912 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200781599513 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738053793202 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487957384325 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122162233191 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572345160779 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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