Men do most of the high level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? What is your opinion on that?
it is widely believed that high-level jobs are done majorly by men, hence, others argue that the government ought to reserve a proportion of these work positions for women. I strongly support this point of view, as this will encourage the ideology of gender equality in the workforce and a meritocratic competition amongst the women to attain this high position.
There are plethora of reasons the government should reserve a proportion of high-level jobs for women. One of the major reasons is that this development will support the growth of gender equality in top positions in the workforce. Ultimately, this will create an avenue for the opinions of women to be heard in different issues affecting them and the society. Hence, creating harmony between the male workforce and their female counterparts in terms of decision-making. For instance, a recent survey showed that 90% of men in top level management admitted that having women in a similar position will bring more progress in the advocacy of equal gender in the workforce.
In addition, the government supporting the reservation of high-level positions for women will encourage a competition based on merits amongst the women to get the best candidate. ln other words, this will motivate the females to perform excellently well in their education and other aspects of life, so as to attain this senior position. Thus, encouraging the women with the best performances, enjoy the privileges of a high-level position.
In conclusion, I certainly subscribe to the view that the government ought to reserve a portion of the high-level jobs for women, because this will encourage the growth of equal men and women in top-level jobs and bring about a healthy competition for the best candidate amongst the women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19097222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90009969164 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475694444444 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9826105887 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.909090909 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358705820292 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163786980357 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148293349645 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263049981353 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766039579183 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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