Is the mental strength important for success in sports or is it more important to have strong and fit people in sports. Discuss both views and give opinion.
It is argued by some people that being mentally strong is key to success in sports, whereas others think that having those with physical strength is more significant. I am personally in favour of the viewpoint of the first group.
Nobody can deny that strength and fitness contribute greatly to a sportman's career. Taking up a sport is not easy as heard, in fact, it is a process of hard training in which muscles are often driven to limit. Thus, sports require powerful body, energy and flexibility. Football, for instance, is not for weeklings. A professional match lasts for up to 90 minutes so only those with lots of energy and fast reflexes are qualified for it. Moreover, injuries are unable to be avoided when being involved in sports. Well-built bodies can mitigate the severity of injuries whenever athletes hurt themselves. For example, rugby players are prone to violent collision, so they must be large and strong so as to prevent unwanted consequences.
However, a strong determination is the key. Strong though athletes may be, they can not always win without willpower and self-confidence. Spirits affect a lot to the outcome, and I believe success can be achieved only when people have a clear goal in mind. Take an example of runners who are deprived of energy in the middle of the race, only strong will and determination will help in such situation, giving them an incentive to completed it.
In conclusion, while physical strength and fitness help a lot in sports, I believe that without mental strenght all efforts will go in vain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92045454545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76947306551 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7977139194 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213286984996 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628977995312 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503489394705 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123148247912 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357945635274 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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