With the migration of people to cities in search of a better life, many rural areas are now underpopulated. What are some problems associated with a lack of people living and working in rural areas? What solutions could be proposed?
One of the most topical issues in modern society is the individual’s migration to modern cities. This has become a major problem for rural areas. This essay will discuss the problems associated with this trend and offer some measures to tackles this issue.
Generally speaking, there are two main results of migration to cities. Firstly, it is a well-known fact that migrating to urban areas gives rise to undevelopment of the rural economy. Although many people move to cities from rural region, governments only concentrate on the development of cities. The result of this is that it brings about the underdevelopment of rural areas. Secondly, it has been proven that the migration of young generations to cities leads to aging society of populations in rural. The result of this is that the elderly suffers from poverty without young people’s aid. Overall, rural’s situation is getting worse more and more, rural citizens can feel a big gap between cities and rural areas as well.
Despite, these challenges, there are a variety of ways to resolve this issue. Firstly, governments should support budgets for rural’s infrastructures and make a good balance between cities and rural areas. If governments decide to improve rural areas, many people will not migrate to cities. A second solution is that governments had better advance rural educational facilities such as schools, libraries, museums, and concert halls. If governments spend enormous budgets for education developments, many parents will not move to cities for children’s education.
In conclusion, this is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, I believe that the best solution is making policies about rural areas. If governments have responsibility for rural developments, citizens will not need to consider migrating to cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46875 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04720884923 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3654866993 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26076198221 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855373759489 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053469317796 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153808318168 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054605355486 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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