With the migration of people to cities in search of a better life, many rural areas are now underpopulated. What are some problems associated with a lack of people living and working in rural areas? What solutions could be proposed?
In modern society, the issue of underpopulated in rural places has become highly controversial. There are those who say that migration of people to cities can cause serious problems however, others believe that it should not. In this essay, I will examine both sides of view and provide some solutions.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people believe that governments and municipalities should support and invest in rural areas. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favor of this phenomenon is because the number of people who live in countrysides has been decreasing gradually. Especially, young people leave rural areas due to their prospect. If young people leave from rural areas constantly, the possibility of rural areas' development will reduce naturally. Secondly, it has been proven that urbanization leads to discrimination between cities and countrysides. It creates the country's unbalanced. If governments cannot resolve their region gap, the country will face enormous trouble with the citizen.
Despite, these challenges, there are various ways to resolve this issue. Firstly, the governments should construct and improve the countrysides' facilities such as public transportation, amenities and education facilities. The result of this is that people would not want to leave their venue. A second solution is that governments make particular benefits for people who decide to stay in rural areas such as tax cut or support fund. If people get various benefits from governments, they will stay and become useful people about their rural areas' development.
In conclusion, it is clear there is a topic which is relevant to modern society. I believe that the best solution is that discouraging people move from countrysides to cities. If governments can not realize the problem of urbanization, they will hard to avoid significant problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.89615384615 5.12529762239 135% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.94369040423 2.80592935109 212% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 75.1856036752 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144779608576 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670884737807 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694106697481 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105095353926 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312015501234 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.44 12.4159519038 181% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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