Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As the country is developing, people tend to be interested in the fields that are invested by the government. Many people argue that space should be focused more than other fields while others think the authorities should allocate money to technology or medical care to improve living’s standards. I am convinced that the government should take an important action to invest in both fields.
Many countries have allocated a certain proportion of money to research about space in recent years. Firstly, spending in space helps us to understand more about the Earth and the universe, promotes research activities all over the world, supports highly skilled jobs and fuels technology advancements. Investment in space research would create more wonderful opportunities for talented workforce, which subsequently contribute to the progression of the country’s economy and human civilization as well. Secondly, investment in space underscores that the Earth is a precious oasis in our life and deepens understanding’s people about the effect of greenhouse or climate change to Earth’s atmosphere. Thanks to that, people could find a way to protect our planet’s habitability and improve our life.
On the other hand, many people consider that investment in space is a waste of the national budget so the authorities should use money for other fields like technology or medical care to promote living standards on Earth. Apparently, medical care plays a pivotal role in our life, ensuring both mental and physical health for people, and protecting them against lethal diseases like covid19 or cancer. For example, people invested a large amount of money to research and produce the most efficient vaccines against covid19 that saved our lives in recent years. It is also worth mentioning that technology can grant people easier access to fundamental disciplines that help them to optimize their work and study and make collaborative effort to the country’s progression.
In conclusion, although people think that space exploration activities should be allocated a larger national budget than other fields like technology or medical care, I believe that both fields are of paramount importance and thereby equal investment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mportance and thereby equal investment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47246376812 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93275471179 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544927536232 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0352007538 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.230769231 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200763002398 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780468934162 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522900574624 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130177772127 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381516061187 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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