These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh(be far more significant) the disadvantages?
In recent years, there has been an increase in travelers to different countries due to the convenience and relaxed policies. Although this trend is not without disadvantages, i firmly believe that its upsides could be far more significant.
One of the prominent drawbacks of traveling without difficulties abroad is that people will have certain hurdles. First and foremost, because of the ease and convenience of going to different counties, people will not take time to determine national cultures or weather conditions. This gives rise to people facing culture shock such as being sick when adapting to extreme weather. As a result, traveling to new countries will leave a bad impression on visitors due to the lack of preparation. Moreover, travelers are susceptible for involving illegal activities because they lack knowledge about which countries they opt for going to, which is a potential opportunity for some crime organizations. For example, if a traveler is not aware of criminals, it is easy for them to be pickpocketed, robbed, or even purchase drugs violating the laws of a country.
Nevertheless, I believe that it is necessary to acknowledge that visiting other countries without difficulties will bring positive effects. Firstly, the national economy attracting tourists will flourish their economy. Since tourism could be considered a lucrative economy that creates huge revenue for the host country. For example, immigration policies in Vietnam are easier than in other countries like Japan, and China. Therefore, Viet Nam captivates more international visitors. In addition, people will broaden their horizons thanks to traveling straightforwardly to other regions. As each country has its own culture and beauty destination, people could take in-depth knowledge in many terms when exploring new areas such as geography, history, and cuisine.
In conclusion, in spite of that, there are compelling reasons why being easy to travel to other countries has drawbacks such as people facing certain difficulties in foreign countries, I believe that the benefits are more significant because of developing the economy and people broadening their knowledge.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and people broadening their knowledge.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54354354354 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05563487217 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2363179612 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310138801097 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899760099102 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506825578628 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180896163069 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252716613064 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and people broadening their knowledge.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54354354354 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05563487217 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2363179612 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310138801097 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899760099102 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506825578628 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180896163069 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252716613064 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.