Mobile phones enable us totaka work or personal calls anywhere ,anytime.Do you think it has a positive effect on individuals and society?
First of all,today technology have huge using in any nation through it think that dozen has take personal calling in anywhere and anywhere on work region.The root can that some older ponder that it has very bad influencing on work.There are manifold reasons for this.This essay would throw some light an all the aspects to see things in the right way.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There are especially they must take call on non professional adolescent instead of they could not awareness about any work.For instance, project,presentation, deal
and so on.However,they has always using plethora website like instagram,Twitter and
Facebook extra.otherwise,they should umpteen time killing in whole life as well as time is very precious in our life because it has never back in their life.
Nevertheless,there are no denying,in my point of view, off spring have not mixed their personal and professional line in our work.I think that,it must superb influences on work areas .Therefore,
employees always active all in all they would easily extrovert in any project as far as they had consciousness about all new dhaling.lastly,utilize
can focus on work as well as they should increase knowledge day by day.However,they must good impact on community because they has always learning new skills everyday.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand some older believe that youngster should only focus on their work.it has most company giving lots of opportunity in their professional career.On other hand employees has always time talking personal life everywhere.Thus,it is
huge demerit of their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i reckon, i think, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38582677165 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46595355215 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.3415674505 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 342.0 106.682146367 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.5 20.7667163134 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.5 7.06120827912 446% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970427288353 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648040156378 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407904003439 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.038382087525 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458903659643 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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