Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also negative effects. Do the disadvantages of having mobile phones outweigh the advantages?
Nowadays technology are high advanced and being used in people’s daily lives. They are easy to use and can be found anywhere. Technology such as mobile telephones and computer were made to brought many benefits in people’s live. However, technology have negative effect if we misused them. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages from technology.
First, the evolution of technology have negative effect. For example, human depending on technology too much. Man doesn’t need to think. Although calculator was a great invention, man no longer make physics calculation and no longer works their’s memory. Second, technology made many people reduce their human effort, it would imply that more work is done by machines. This even to less work for people. The human is becoming ever so old by the day.
On the other hand, the evolution of technology is beneficial to humans for several reasons. Technology can help treat more sick people and save many lives. The invention of the computer was a very a important points. Communication is this enhanced and companies can communicated more easily with other countries.
Secondly, technology has also increased the productivity of almost every industry in the world. Technology let human pay with E-money rather than using physics money. The digital money has make a huge changes in the world and now everywhere is using it.
In conclusion, it seems that the technology we use has more of a positive impact that a negative one. The problem in human who become lazy because of the help of technology is unavoidable because it all happen based on the person himself how he uses technology, but from another point of views, technology really helps us in all fields and technology cannot be replaced just because they have negative effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their' or 'theirs'?
Suggestion: their; theirs
...physics calculation and no longer works their’s memory. Second, technology made many pe...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he invention of the computer was a very a important points. Communication is this...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'point'?
Suggestion: point
... of the computer was a very a important points. Communication is this enhanced and com...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
...oney. The digital money has make a huge changes in the world and now everywhere is usin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15254237288 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73715747182 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.6514093719 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.380952381 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0476190476 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159255180777 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488205273606 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788643442249 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904698016655 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884588117673 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.