Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?
Weight gaining is the major problem of the modern world. Most of the children are suffering from these diseases. In this topic, we are discussing the cause of obesity and its solution.
To begin with, the first problem was the use of junk food. obviously, it is a fact that all children love to eat more junk food rather than homemade food which is the main reason for obesity. Today different types of packing food are available in all stores easily with reasonable pack and price. However, in modern days all parents are busy with their own schedules. So, they do not have much time for the child and make some homemade food. The solution for Obesity is schools must give instruction to all the parents that only homemade food is allowed in the school area and also they must provide knowledge between homemade and unhealthy food and their effects.
Secondly, Playing mobiles, games and watching tv also another main cause of obesity. Nowadays, children enjoy indoor games rather than outdoor games. Parents also allow them to stay indoor for security reasons. So, without exercise and physical gaining weight is simple. For the solution, the school must provide some physical activities class for their students as named their hobbies at least once a week. moreover, parents also give some time to their children and took them to park or social groud and play with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...first problem was the use of junk food. obviously, it is a fact that all children love to...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...med their hobbies at least once a week. moreover, parents also give some time to their c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87234042553 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21393586095 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0104028106 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133669353538 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494269956046 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428851934004 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11736673471 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653131239225 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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