Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
modern technologies allow us to use numerous types of communication. some people believe that these inventions decrease the amount of time spending with friends and families. However, in my view, there are more advantages of new technologies than disadvantages.
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It goes without saying that today people spend less time with each other. It is much easier to send an email or a message to your friend than to meet him in person. Moreover, online communication has bad influence on our social lives overall, because we talk with others less and this leads to lack of interaction. Eventually, this can cause depression as well.
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On the other hand, new forms of communication help individuals to be in touch with their friends and family members who are far away from them. For example, 50 years ago Americans could not connect with Europeans. Nevertheless, in the modern world they can communicate in different ways such as Skype, emails, messages or social nets. In addition, given communication tools have low cost and give hundreds of opportunities to be in contact. As far as I am concerned, modernized resources of intercourse have negative effect on our social lives, nonetheless, they also have positive consequences.
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To sum up, new ways of communication such as emailing or messaging have lots of cons. Despite that, in my opinion, pros are much more important. Furthermore, new technologies facilitate our connections with other people and give us some sort of freedom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Modern
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Suggestion: Some
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Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...e with each other. It is much easier to send an email or a message to your friend than to mee...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, well, for example, in addition, sort of, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17842323651 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07751684263 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663900414938 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3078249896 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8666666667 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271872397098 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771942126923 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490531561523 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145288522091 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450442253017 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.