Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases. This is one reason that people are living longer lives now than they did in the past.
Discuss the effects this might have on society.
There are myriad drugs produced by modern medical scientists nowadays and technological developments contribute to enhance new treatments for several diseases. Human health is a crucial subject so that people's life expectations and opportunities of treatments and diagnoses have enhance thank to the modern medical science. I am of opinion that despite having some drawbacks (drugs trade and human health trade), these developments are beneficial on society.
The first outcome of modern medical science on society is that medical drugs have provided people to cure easily. For instance, previously, people could not access treatments with ease so they had to cure people using some herbal compounds and it was so hard to find out proper vegetables. But now, there are many several drugs produced by appropriate vegetables. It is a positive impact on society in terms of human health.
Another substantial subject is diagnostic mechanism. It is important to say that as using developed medical devices such as X-Ray and MR, doctors can diagnose completely an illness before it deteriorated. There are a lot of test systems that assist determining illnesses. For example, MR system can evaluate how the internal organs look like, blood values can be measured thanks to this system and many disease can be diagnosed through all of these test mechanism.
In conclusion, if entire modern medical developments such as drugs and devices are used honestly for human health, without expectation of earning money, these developments can exactly contribute to extend people's life time and be beneficial on society. I think medical science will always be essential for all of us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
...nities of treatments and diagnoses have enhance thank to the modern medical science. I ...
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Line 9, column 399, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...n be measured thanks to this system and many disease can be diagnosed through all of these t...
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Line 13, column 214, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...an exactly contribute to extend peoples life time and be beneficial on society. I think m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, honestly, if, look, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37121212121 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86287467824 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5612160851 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154929100454 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561033830801 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459845522736 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961783060737 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361848737479 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.