In the modern era, internet and other technology entirely changed the field of exchange of information. Some people belive that despite all benefits,it can be very harmful to out society. According to my view, if there is proper control on the use of technology then if would be very useful in many aspects.
First of all, technology provide fast and secure source of communication. People can easily access various websites, databases and information nowadays. Storing information become very easy. Governments mostly use computers and store information
on them or on the servers. However, hackers can break through the security and steal important information. For example, a hacker can hack a bank's system and steal information or money or corrupt the system of band causing lot of trouble.
On the other hand despite all harm, technology has many advantages also. Communication can easily be made by people form one point of the world to another quickly. Moreover it become very east to collect information about anything over internet. In the past people have to find the information by reading books but now one can remove his doubt just in seconds just by searching about it.
To sum up, the consequences of technology are undeniable. Every good thing has dark side , so as technology. However , if the misuse of the technology is controlled there are lot of benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, for example, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13716814159 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85688637936 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62389380531 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8315782941 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5625 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982215852336 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338279739084 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368098470277 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542640955137 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365872911592 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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