Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange of information. Far from being beneficial, this is a danger to our societies.
It is argued that nowadays advanced technologies accelerate the unstoppable spread of data, hence it could be a reason for some negative consequences for humanity. This essay completely agrees with that statement because of the obvious drawbacks it brings to society. Following paragraphs maintain main minuses of the fast-spreading information, such as cyber terrorism and influence on the mind.
First of all, it is necessary to notice that the mess of internet data is a comfortable platform for cyber terrorists. Every day thousands of users are infected with dangerous viruses, which hack computers inside. In this case, new technologies allow hackers to find a victim or information they need at any moment because the internet has a huge flow of information, users are not attended to the data they download.
The second, but not the least drawback is the number of news people get. With the enormous pressure of routing it is very hard to retain mind clear. People get tired of the information so consequences will be the exacerbating of acrimony, feeling lost and being bored with everything.
It also badly affects on ability choosing and selecting useful data, furthermore minds become less thoughtful. Human is becoming weak and poor.
To conclude, the arguments of the negative impact of fast spreading info showed that not always modern technologies bring benefits to global communication. I think it is important to sort the data and control internet connections for safety and quality of the information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, second, so, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27459016393 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99007079863 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643442622951 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2162648484 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120314820679 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341008438792 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323449628309 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057552452022 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033375064415 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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