There is no doubt that technology is being used in many workplaces. In my opinion, technology has dramatically altered how workers interact and do their jobs, and there are no significant drawbacks of relying too much on technology.
Nobody can argue that interaction among employees is more effective and easier using the internet, faxes and mobile phones. Today, many companies are equipped with these facilities which lead to a better collaboration among workers. As an example, these people can communicate via email, online networks and video conferencing using different types of computer applications such as Skype, Google Drive and Microsoft Outlook. Furthermore, the recent technological devices allow a company to organize its files efficiently with better time management and low-cost. For instance, the ability to store large amounts of data on a computer is convenient and inexpensive, and saves space.
In addition, as technology provides tools to perform routine tasks/jobs such as typing and transferring documents, business operations become more productive. Computers help speed up business activities such as collection of the consumer feedback and inspection of product to produce better quality results. It is hard to imagine majority of companies running their business without technology that has been emerging as a foundation of many productions and service processes in this world. Even though, a company which invests on capital expenditure still requires intelligent software to keep track of their operations such as running online banking with the consumer from around the world. For these reasons, it seems to me that technology brings many advantages rather than negative effects on business.
In conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionized working life by allowing greater collaboration among employees, and this development can be seen as a progress, which carries many advantages, for business activities
- In many countries it is common for families to own and run their own business Some people think this is the best way to run a business while others consider this a potential source of problem What is your opinion 77
- Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.What is the reason for this?What problems can this cause? 72
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation 84
- Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents What is the reason for this What problems can this cause 76
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72164948454 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06138703068 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632302405498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5018357047 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143836666178 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512551887443 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530550714122 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102456079022 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595496635963 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.