Model role play an important role in development of a chid. But nowadays, many violent behaviours appear on tv and do harm to the mind of children. This essay will discuss how the issue is cause as well as measures can be taken to deal with this problem.
There are several reasons for the the growth in the criminal rate relate to media. Firstly, bully and stimulating scenes on tv have negative effect on childen because they form an ill mannered character of hero in their mind. They claim that agood man have to know how to fight and defeat the people who do much harm to them..Secondly, unhealthy shows on tv is a casual agency of hyperactivity disorder on the youth. When they see them on tv, they wil do the expession of them. In some case, they can not control their mind, and thus they desperately keep hitting on a defendant and cause serious pains on them.as a result, the rate of juvenile delinquency inclrase more and more.
Because of the danger of this trend, collaboration between family and authorities is necessary to reduce thir problem. Parental guidence can contribute to discoraging this by some actions like commenting and criticizing the bad behaviours when they appear on tv or anywhere children can see them. In addition to family, authorities can organize more sport clubs and provide incentives to them to encourage them to take part in those clubs.
In conclustion, there are various causes as well as methods relating to this trend. In my opinion, On the top of that, individuals should be aware of this disadvantages to avoid and not to follow them.
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- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74637681159 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71333029885 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9943397598 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146510559786 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551540425566 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551105695656 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876622633792 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022924065296 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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