In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products, such as medicines and clothing. Do you agree or disagree?
The problems of using to much animals to provide food, medicine and clothing has been ongoing in recent years. Some people argured that killing fauna to produce nutriment and other products is unnecessary. In my point of view, I agree with the following idea and will discuss several compelling reasons in this essay.
In modern times, we are faced with many physical condition challenges relating to poor health, icuding cancer, heart disease, caused by excesssive consumption of meat which contains lots of cholesterol on a regular, long-term basis. Moreover, consuming wild animals might expose us to dangerous viruses. For example, Corona Virus exists in bats and when we eat them, we can absolutely be infected. Fortunately, many alternative meat products are available on the market. In facts, vegeterian diets are being loved by growing number of people and it can provide as much as the nutrients human needs. In particular, tofu and mushroom contains high levels of protein, a kind of nutrients presumably only found in meat. Therefore, a large number of people are going to use them as a subtitude.
Furthermore, medical experiments on animals and medicines manifactured from animals' body parts receive little endorsement than the past. With herbs and many other types of plant-based medicines, we can also study and find the treatment to many illnesses such as using ginseng to protect our health. More seriously, thousands of wild fauna are being killed everyday with their fur are taken to produce coats and accesories for the fashion industry. There are now better using eco-friendly sources like flora and make accessories from artificial materials rather than force animals suffer the paint and dead.
In summary, I would concede that killing animals for human desires and our needs are no loonger necessary. we can choose a different sources of medicine and clothing without harm animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
The problems of using to much animals to provide food, medicine ...
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Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
The problems of using to much animals to provide food, medicine and c...
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Line 2, column 727, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...esumably only found in meat. Therefore, a large number of people are going to use them as a subti...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...housands of wild fauna are being killed everyday with their fur are taken to produce coa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...and our needs are no loonger necessary. we can choose a different sources of medic...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'source'?
Suggestion: source
...er necessary. we can choose a different sources of medicine and clothing without harm a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in fact, in particular, in summary, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24509803922 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70700499272 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643790849673 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1559059401 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188402872145 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055637733513 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525254641271 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11904825043 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053299605651 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.