In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live with any face to face contact with others.is it a positive or negative development in your opinion. To what extent do you support this development.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For-instance, the given topic asserts that due to the internet facilities such as: shopping, doing online jobs and sharing our views with each others as well as survive without making direct contact with each other. Should all these facilities provided by internet indicate positive or negative changes in this present scenerio?Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who reckon that internet plays highly crucial role in everyone life. There are plethora of merits of utilizing internet. They strengthen their view point by claiming that in this modern era, massive number of people prefer to purchase huge variety of products related to the cosmetic as well as household goods, sunscreen lotions are the best epitome. Therefore, I have to say that, internet plays fundamental role in our life and it seems that it is a positive change. Moreover, internet service is a best source of communication with our friends, relatives which were residing in foreign countries. As a result, it provide great assistance to hold strong relationships.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who reckon that advancement in modern era in the field of technology especially, in internet have some negative impact on the development of nation. They claim that internet is just a wastage of time. According to their prospective, they realize that most of the individuals communicate with their relatives for longer period because, internet service is cost-effective. They believe that 'Time and tides waits for none.' As a result, such people who spend lot of time on internet may lost their precious time.
To crown it all, I have to say that nevertheless, there is no single conclusion. Still, I make this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. "Every garden has weeds" therefore, nodoubt, internet have few drawbacks as some people spend much time on it as they required ultimately, leads to wastage of time but, it has voluminous merits as it provide great assistance to make social bonding as well as purchasing variety of goods. At the end, I personally realize that using internet facilities leads to positive development in this contemporary era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13571428571 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91653644024 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538095238095 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4648689917 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.85 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21827978507 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588414946977 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515101897035 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132849450439 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502753046251 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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