There has been an increase in the number of homeless people all around the world. What are the causes of it?
It is undoubtly the case that in the present scenerio, large number of people in the world found to be homeless which is also affecting the society adversely. In this essay, I am going to examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some practical policies that authorities could implement to curb this hurdle.
The first step is to understand why massive number of people become homeless. Broadly speaking, there are three main reasons for this. The first and foremost is natural disasters for example, floods, tusnami which is responsible for vandalism of habitat. Apart from that, one of the cause of could be consumption of drugs for instance, heroine, cocaine taken by individuals in this modern era due to which drug addicted person is not able to find pros and cons of taking drugs. As a result, spend plethora of money to buy it or sometimes, sold house to inhale drugs so, I have to say that, consumption of drugs are also responsible for making the people homeless. Last but not the least, lack of moral values is the main cause of this problem as we all know that moral values are "part and parcel" of our life but, nowadays it seems that after getting married most of the individual prefer to live separate from their other family members which is the main reason for making the people homeless because, they prefer to register the names of their elders in ashrams.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be to council the drug addicted person and make general public aware from the side effects of taking drugs as well as aware the youth regarding the importance of elders in human life. The best epitome of this is establishment of centre where authorities organize seminars to council the drug addicted person.
In summary, there are voluminous factors that have led to make the problem worst. While, it may not be possible to find the complete solution of this , this could be probably solved by providing general awareness among the individuals of the nation regarding the importance of elders as well as illeffects of drugs because they are responsible for making the people homeless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87566137566 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52432557941 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510582010582 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.4861122527 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.769230769 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0769230769 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112902424634 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457579795637 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638649103854 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678293942459 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472515182595 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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