Money is the key to happiness, without money we are nothing. Do you agree with this opinion?
Now a days,due to increase in competition and the luxuries lifestyle of the contemporary society,making more money is a necessity for many individuals.it is an essential part in everyone's life but it is not everything.happiness is a state of mind and cannot be found in monetary terms.This essay disagrees that money is the only means of happiness.
To begin with,Being at mental peace is important than monetary benefits.If the mind,body and soul are in harmony,happiness is the outcome.while people earn only to satisfy their needs and forget about their health that hard-earned money at the cost of their health will lead to deteriorating their health only.According to an article by a health professional in the times of India,wealthy and rich people suffer from depression and lifestyle diseases more than the poor people does.
furthermore,While some Individuals run after making money, they forget about the people around them who cares for their wellbeing and eventually loose those gems from their lives.Even though money is vital for fulfilling the basic needs like food,clothing and shelter.it is not everything and the only resort for being happy.When a person has healthy relationships whether it be family or friends and have a good as well as loving environment around him he can stay cheerful and disease free.According to The World health organisation,The time spent with loved ones makes people happy and healthy as compared to the people who constantly works on achieving their financial goals.
All things considered the obvious conclusion is,money cannot buy happiness.people can stay happy by good relation and sound health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39382239382 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39811773286 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.518169599 49.4020404114 404% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 349.25 106.682146367 327% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.75 20.7667163134 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114015265307 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826064218296 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291457223772 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826064218296 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291457223772 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 13.0946893788 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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