Mostly city workers prefer to live in villages and take a long way to work daily, which is a serious problem in most major cities, because it increasing the traffic congestion and environment damaged.
There are some solutions to support the ideas of why city workers do not need go on a long journey to go work place frequently. Firstly, workers can stay nearby company areas because it help workers easier to reach work place faster. To illustrate, workers can walk there and do not need any transportation that can make a pollution to the environment. However, i believe that lowering rented houses price in city areas might help to decrease use of vehicles and decrease traffic congestion as well.
Another important solutions is that high salary from company can help workers live in city areas because now in city areas living expenses are extremely high than in the country areas. Finally, company can provide boarding room for workers so workers do not need to go on long journey to work place. In my opinion, I do think this is an effective way. However, i believe that not all company can provide this due to company areas.
In conclusion, there are many ways to reduce traffic congestion and make a healthy environment but it also depends on how the country solve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to go'?
Suggestion: to go
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...an stay nearby company areas because it help workers easier to reach work place fast...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pollution'.
Suggestion: pollution
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8018018018 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55204729145 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5492655636 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203878538438 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850038354316 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458478432923 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134187485982 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302900644026 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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