More and more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel into work every day. The result is increased traffic congestion and damage to the environment. What measures do you think could be taken to encourage people not to travel such long distances into work?
City centers around the world, from Shang Hai to New York, are beset with a common problem: traffic congestion. Combined with the overcrowded issues, city dwellers are of the opinion living in the suburb area. However, it seems that this phenomenon has led to other environmental problems such as air pollution due to the long distance commutes. Thus, there are certain measures, which will be discussed in this essay, should be implemented in order to alleviate the situation.
First and foremost, public transportation, which is still lack in developing countries, seemed to be the best solution in this scenario. If trains and buses facilities are improved with the funding from the government, people, who live far from the city center, might feel incentive to use it more. Thus, the number of private vehicles come into the city could be reduced, leading to less traffic jams. In addition, the authorities should implement several taxes, toll fees on driving and parking cars in the urban areas. This money then could be used to enhance the city facilities as well as tackle the environment problems.
Another solution that could be effective is to create more job opportunities in hinterland and support the work from home trend. If there are better job offers in the country side, where people the range of occupation is still small, people might not have to travel a long journey to workplace as usual. Furthermore, it appears that if companies and the governments take the advantages of the trending of working from home, it could also help mitigate the congestion issues since leaving home to work is unnecessary. Although, these measures could temporary solve the problems but it might facilitate the urbanization, which is another global problem.
In conclusion, improving the public transport and imposing certain fees on own a cars would certainly curb the traffic congestion. Although, bring the job opportunities and works from city to home and to country area are effective too, but it might also lead to other problems in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11834319527 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74023278932 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.887492739 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211123803968 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651064570436 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389102528572 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116650868681 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437932880681 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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