More and more governments are using various methods to invite more tourists to visit their locality.
What are the different methods they use?
Which one is the most effective?
Improving transport system is one of the most effective methods used by the goverments to invite more visitors to their locality, as it is accessible to anyone. Therefore, focusing on transport system is for more important for the issue, motivating them to visit again.
Two of the ways goverments boost visitors to visit their local tourist destinations is by improving transport system and reducing tax. When tourists feel they are easy to go many destinations, as it is accesible, they tend to have more motivation to visit. When goverments combine a lower tax on tourist destination tickets with exeptional transportation systems, they normally have a winning formula. For example, when Goverments of Bali reducing tax on tickets to entrance Sanur beach, it increase their ticket sales index for about 35% in 2021. This was succesful strategy, but it was not until they developed up their transportation systems, invested a huge of money to repair public transports, such as buses and air crafts, making it accesible to anyone and combining with lower tax on tickets by 50% after, Sanur beach became the most popular in Indonesia.
The accessibility is crucial attracting visitors, but this counts of nothing if the tickets price are expensive. All the goverments in the world will not give tourtists bad transportation services. However, there are many cases of succesful countries with lower tax on tickets for beautiful destination, but have a bad transportation systems to go there. For instance, many budget destinations have this to built into their actual business model. Thailand knows that people love their low tax on many tourist destinations in Bangkok, but very little attention to provide good transportation system, such as crash roads and broken buses. Nowadays, after the goverment of Thailand fixed their transportation systems and combined with low tax on tickets, making Thailand as number one favorite tourist destination in Asia.
In conclusion, it is agreed that improving transport system, making it accessible to may visitors. As a result, it motivating them to visit again and again. If possible, a lowering tax should be counted as it is impact to devisa.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81280788177 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82466679587 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522167487685 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8407589205 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323255806281 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144982506839 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648915567134 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214540261387 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366375810638 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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