More and more people are not eating meals together with their family member.
Why is this?
Do the advantages outweigh the demerits?
Flexibilities are one strong reason people prefer to eat alone than together with their family member. While eating alone can be used to chill their lives, people using their own time more likely to express their emotions, surpassing the demerits.
Many people kick back to being alone because its flexibilities, as individuals are able to eat anything they want anytime anywhere without minding someone else. This is because they do not need to make a deal on what they want to eat with other people, although they are family member or friends, avoiding debate and quarrels that might be happened while making decision of food and restaurant. There is an evidence suggests that 78% of Indonesian people enjoy to eat alone at everywhere they are, this is because their leisure time to eat and their family are different since they have many contrast activities. Additionally, they do not want to be complicated with it.
What is more, two advantages from eating alone are to enjoy their lives in peace and express moods because its "me time". However, it deliver to antisocial behaviour and loneliness, and being lonely more often gives a rise to detrimental health of human mind. How to tackle this? Interacting with family member is required, and telling emotions to family member are suggested. Evidence suggests that 86% teenagers in Indonesia prefer eating alone to enjoy life by order expensive food as self appreciation, and sometimes they also able to release some emotions like crying while eating because of stress.
To conclude, it is agreed that the advantages of eating alone for people's is outweighing the disadvantages, expressing emotions and enjoying life. If possible, once a week eating together with family is necessary to keep the relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24662162162 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65386405647 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8308457157 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292724005387 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11526620477 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662988912542 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160247918628 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587752283066 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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