More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. Why? What can we do to encourage this?
The advancement of technology, medicine, and science has created a major shift in many people's lifestyles these days, and there is now a greater emphasis on disease prevention. People are starting to adopt healthier ways of living, including a more health-conscious diet and frequent exercise. This essay will outline the reasons behind this trend and possible ways to promote it further.
The main cause of this new trend may stem from the influence of the media and the availability and accessibility of healthier options. Firstly, there are a plethora of channels, websites, vlogs, and social media pages about healthy living, and the mainstream media are now promoting more and more information regarding healthy diets and active lifestyles. Because the media has always been a major influence on people's behavior, this can have a significant impact on them. The second reason lies in the easier access to healthy options. Thanks to the development of agriculture and infrastructure, stores and supermarkets are now offering a much wider range of food products with high nutritional value. Besides, more sport and exercise facilities are springing up in urban areas, making it easier than ever for people to stay physically active.
To help support this development, there are several issues that can be addressed by the government. Firstly, despite the availability of healthier food products, some are only accessible at high prices, making it difficult for low-income families to choose healthier options. Therefore, the prices of these products need to be decreased in order to make them more universally attainable. Secondly, governments should allocate more funding to free sport and exercise facilities. This can create more opportunities for people to engage in physical activities through the promotion of different sports. Some remote areas nowadays still experience a severe lack of facilities and equipment for people to participate in sport and exercise.
In conclusion, there are two reasons explaining why people are becoming more health-conscious and the governments can further encourage this trend by assisting in the accessibility of healthy food ,and sport and exercise facilities.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing in the accessibility of healthy food ,and sport and exercise facilities.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51470588235 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0509670031 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1659699746 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326755903391 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099722978357 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757435098892 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216127387978 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749356532863 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing in the accessibility of healthy food ,and sport and exercise facilities.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51470588235 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0509670031 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1659699746 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326755903391 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099722978357 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757435098892 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216127387978 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749356532863 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.