More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life,but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
In recent years, there are an enormous number of migrants settling down in metropolis to search for a better life standard. However, urban citizens have to face with various problems. This essay will point out some challenges of living in urban areas and address the approaches for them.
Firstly, environmental pollution is one of the alarming issues of metropolises . The urban residents have experienced such polluted problems as water contamination, deforestation, and air pollution which lead to climate change and damage the marine ecosystems. According to the statistics of the Resources and Environment in Vietnam (2015), nearly two-thirds of forest areas had cut off to exploit for coals and oils or build factories and houses, which let thousands plants and animals species die out and even be under threat. In order to solve this problem, the governments should raise awareness of environmental issues to the citizens. They can spread the consequences of deforestation on social media to warn residents, invest in renewable energy from solar, wind, or water power and promote recycling for their citizens.
The second challenge is the social evils existing in modern life. Drug addiction, pickpocketing, gambling are the typical examples to collaborate this point. To diminish this issue, the government should heighten residents’ intellect. They can make vocational training programs and create jobs for those who move into cities. For instance, to prevent the social evils, the local authorities in one city of Vietnam have organized the sewing and conical hats making training and community services for migrants.
In conclusion, there are various obstacles of living in metropolises and the urban residents need proper steps to tackle these problems.
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- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life,but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, third, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53113553114 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94950127673 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.50772026 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187902319156 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054210822941 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460996683486 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105071786454 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569943344309 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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