More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult.
Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city.
How can governments make urban life better for everyone
It is undoubtedly true that people in rural areas move to cities for a better outlook. This comes with several problems resulting from distinctive factors and recommended measures could be taken by the government to improve the situation.
The main problem for anyone hoping to migrate to a large city is the cost of living is likely to be much higher than that in a small town or village, especially housing charges. As a result, the rate of homelessness during urbanization is heading to the top. Another drawback of living in a major city is heavy pollution including poor air quality. It puts city dwellers at a higher risk of lung cancer, asthma attacks, and other respiratory illnesses. Moreover, by increasing the population day in day out, cities witness an abnormal level of social evils such as crime and poverty rate.
However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these issues. Firstly, the government should control the commodities' prices as well as constructing more high rising buildings to reduce the house rent. Secondly, to protect cities’ environment, authorities would enact laws to ban vehicles in city centers and promote the use of public transport systems to deal with air pollution and traffic congestion. A third option would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas. By moving industrial zones and jobs to those regions, the pressure on major cities can be dramatically cut down.
In conclusion, a city offers many facilities and opportunities which are not present in rural areas, but not without a cost. The government has a lot to do to improve the lifestyle of the average inhabitant.
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- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 67
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07326007326 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83086440659 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655677655678 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7422144911 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264514586085 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762810042681 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050139534306 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139706953512 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381593369664 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.