It is argued that people tend to go to cities in hope of having a better life. This essay will discuss some of the challenges of living in urban areas and it should be tacked by several effective solutions.
people are likely to migrate to cities result from various problems. To begins with, one of the main problems in living cities is traffic congestion. Increasing unproductive time not only causes stress but also lowers work productivity. To be more specific, City dwellers spend 30 minutes or maybe just over to 1 hour sitting in traffic on their way to and from work. The second problem is poor air quality caused by the toxic emissions released from industrial sites and power plants in recent years. besides that, this puts people suffering from diseases such as lung cancer, other respiratory illnesses, and asthma attacks.
However, some solutions could be taken to solve this problem. Firstly, the government should be improved public transport to make it attractive for people. So these problems will effectively address if people decided to use public transport like the bus, or train instead of private vehicles. In other words, the government also charges peak hour tolls to discourage drivers from traveling during peak periods. Secondly, By enhancing the air quality, stricter regulations would be imposed against hazardous gas emissions and encourage the use of more environmentally friendly energy sources.
In conclusion, although there are certain problems like traffic congestion and poor air quality. It can be solved by various effective methods.
- The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle what are the advantages of this trend Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
- The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 61
- The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2371541502 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68601432174 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664031620553 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3349514182 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239825655414 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753304789339 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756633033967 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136857833216 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743359811513 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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