More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Cities can be seen as places of opportunity; however, people who live in a large metropolics often suffer from overpopulation and pollution. In order to deal with these problems, governments could do many things, such as invest money in social buildings and public transport services.
One of the main problems that citizens are struggling with is overpopulation, which leads to the raising of living costs. In other words, with the rapid influx of people into cities, the population of the cities is abruptly increasing, and supplies ranging from basic commodities to housing will soon be insufficient for everyone. As a result, people in cities have to pay more money to cover their expenses than those who live in the country. In addition, the population also threatens citizens' lives. One of the undeniable reasons for this is that they have to suffer from gas emissions, which are released from factories and vehicles. More over, traffic jams due to overpopulation can make the air quality becomes much poorer. As a result, they can easily to get asthma and other respiratory hazards.
There are several approaches that governments can take to address this issue.First, they should invest money in social or affordable buildings in order to minimize living costs. Secondly, to solve the air pollution problems, authorities can encourage the public to use public transport by improving their services or by organizing campaigns to raise people’s awareness about protecting the environment.
In conclusion, city life can be more stressful and unhealthy than many people expect; however, these problems can be solved by governments by building more social housing and public transportation services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...ernments can take to address this issue.First, they should invest money in social or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36802973978 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95873883859 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0754660725 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274396482812 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922425550451 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895908865507 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179055778801 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927304266341 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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