More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.
what will the consequences of this?
What solutions can you offer?
In this modern world, there has been a movement of people from rural areas migrating to urban regions in search of work. From my perspective, this issue will take a heavy toll on our society and I think authorities should take more steps in order to curb with it.
One of the consequent disadvantages that this problem would bring is overpopulation. To be more specific, as more people reside in industrialized regions, the demands for accommodation will skyrocket. This will lead to lack of space for settlement. In addition to this, that migrants start moving to cities in order to search for work will give rise to high unemployment rate. This may be the fact that occupations are not unlimited, and candidates will have a great deal of obstacles to job security if there are more people opting for the same job than ever before. Last but not least, this problematic situation will do agriculture sector disservice due to the dramatic reduction in the number of peasants nowadays.
To partially address it , governments ought to allocate a large sum for upgrading and modernizing agricultural facilities so as to increase productivity and crop yields. Moreover, some big corporations and enterprises should be encouraged to construct some subsidiaries in rural zones so that inhabitants are capable of confronting with their employment problem.
In conclusion, this trend is seen to leave its marks on human life quality, and I would assert that those solutions I have recommended above will somehow combat with it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02886333645 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.420172965 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297349030539 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107825832733 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603216600381 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144407599215 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105854284513 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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