More and more people are relying on the private cars as their means of transportation. Describe some of the problems overeliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
It is undeniable that, nowadays majority of people opt to get their destinations by their own cars in order to save the time and other purposes. However, there are lots of bad comeouts of it such as polluting the air and traffic jams on streets those we have come to face every single day. In this essay I will discuss some of the problems that have been come out of overreliance of private cars and propose some solutions.
In this highly developed 21st century people have become reluctant to go somewhere on the walk even though it is nearby to them. As a result the petrol that their cars have been using turns out to be very harmful in which emiting a lot of naughty fumes such as carbon dioxide which also is being one of the main cause to the climate change. The way forward to alleviate thos problem can be to produce mobile cars that do not make any emissions in adeaqute quantity. Consequently, it could reduce the amount of fumes that current vehicles produce and also bring plenty of benefits to the environment.
The second problem can be the traffic gridlock which is done by drivers who rely on their personal means of transport. It is not secret that, many roads have already become a great source of frustration particulary in rush hours. As a solution for the government not allow vehicle owners to drive into the city cente as to, decline the number of means of transports those are causing long traffic tails. On this issue there is a scheme is being seen, called ride and park scheme, in which people will use public transport in city area to get to their destinations. It could also ameliorate this phenomenon if it is set.
To sum up, although people know the consequences of overreliance of their cars, more and more drivers keep ignoring them preferring to drive. Yet the government is supposed to take neseccary actions on this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, second, so, as to, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63253012048 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49814127448 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5103387109 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210544471309 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631625037897 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641059024622 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121824634689 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281441903369 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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