More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged To what extend do you agree

Modern lifestyles have brought to humans are convenience and illness. Several peoples res on that use herbal medicine are best the way to limit modern medicine side effect as well as disease-related to food habits and lack of physical activities. Despite this, I agree with those and opine that the right combination of daily routine change along with treatment traditional medicine can make a better life

First of all, folk medicine, which is known as derived from natural ingredients, is easy to find here and there from garden to kitchen, these can cure some minor diseases. For instance, drinking honey ginger tea is extremely effective for treating colds and flu, but the cost is very low. In addition, traditional medicine has fewer side effects compared with pharmaceutical medicine, the main ingredient is a plant-based source. As a result, useful herbal is not harmful to the human body and cut down on other disease complications that are related to cancer illness

finally, the operation of modern medicine is inappropriate to treat rash, obesity, insomnia illness, which have originated from a sedentary lifestyle, old age, and unhealthy diet. So, joining more outdoor activities and promoting a healthy eating habit combines with the usage of herbal medicine to avoid the risk of getting any disease

To conclude, I totally agree with returning to conventional medical solutions to treat current sickness. This is due to their few undesirable effects, remedy the common disease and cheap prices

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...s that are related to cancer illness finally, the operation of modern medicine is in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3305785124 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80933392096 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673553719008 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6485246944 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.25 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253676182427 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930659215913 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525921025316 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139078043002 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593868932702 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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