More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged To what extend do you agree

Modern lifestyles have brought to humans are convenience and illness. Several peoples res on that use herbal medicine are best the way to limit modern medicine side effects. Despite this, I agree with those and opine that the right combination of daily routine change along with treatment traditional medicine can make a better life.

First of all, why people should use folk medicine minor diseases cures is due to easy to find here and there, from garden to kitchen, but at very low cost, For instance, drinking honey ginger tea is extremely effective for treating colds and flu. In addition, traditional medicine has fewer side effects compared with pharmaceutical medicine, this is mainly because they are a plant-based source. As a result, not only such useful herbal is not harmful to the human body but also cut down on other disease complications that are related to cancer illness

Finally, the operation of modern medicine is inappropriate to treat rash, obesity, insomnia illness. For example, Being overweight at the age of 10-18 is extremely popular, due to sitting in front of the computer screen for hours to playing games or eating fast food is high in calories. Thus, joining more outdoor activities, and promoting the healthy eating habit, to avoid the risk of getting any health problem

To conclude, I totally agree with returning to conventional medical solutions to treat current sickness. This is due to their few undesirable effects, remedy the common disease and cheap prices

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18699186992 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64270165434 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678861788618 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8737524402 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.777777778 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269273494967 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094829516851 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541263000583 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140196882057 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612208108483 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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