More and more people are using computers and other electronic devices to access information for printing of books magazines and newspapers should not be done do you agree or disagree with this?
It is an undeniable fact that, in millennium days, the majority of people are using computers or other electronic gadgets to get new information, rather than printing materials, therefore it is believed by some that the printing of books, magazines and newspaper are not needed in this technological world. If asked, I certainly disagree with such an opinion, and the reason for my stand will be analysed further.
There are several reasons why painting materials important. Firstly, every people may not be aware from computers. By this I mean, people from remote area or older people may not be familiar with the computer technology, they would be faced difficulties to use it, therefore those people are preferred printing of books and newspapers to get information. In India, even after advancement in digital technology, printing materials are still more popular than digital ones.
Furthermore, electric device could be created health problems. What I mean to say by this is that, if people want to read articles from computer, they have to read it from screen, which may be emitted infrared ray, it would be dangerous for human eyes, as it might be created eyesight problems. In the USA, 23% of the Americans faced eye hurdles, due to exposed of computer screen.
On the other hand, we can not overlook the benefits of digital equipments. To begin with, people can get easy access to information. In other words, in printing of books, people might require a lot of time to find relevant information, but in digital books they only have to search particular topic and in within a second, they get all the information about it. Secondly, it could be beneficial to children. Because, it provides articles in the form of animation video and audio recordings, which may be helpful to them to remember particular articles or information for a longer period of time, also it is proven by the British scientist that, kids could be remembered any topic for a longer time span, if they get it in the form of audio and video visuals.
In conclusion, I reiterate that, the printing documents are essential, as everyone might not have access to computer technology, also it would be leaded to many health problems, like eyesight, however digital materials, also has the benefits, such as easy access to articles and represent it in animation videos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 581, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, i mean, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99491094148 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77354623338 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511450381679 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.034585553 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.866666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2666666667 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310917380842 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933244969621 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618722494991 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166006666067 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624567794711 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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