More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. what problems does this cause?
what do you think are the possible solutions?
It is a deniable fact that nowadays people are purchasing their own vehicles to make life more comfortable and convenient. it is a sign of affluent, while it creates more problems. The main cause of it to generate more traffic which leads to polluting the environment and solution can be done by imposing more taxes on buying vehicles and make public transport more reliable and accessible.
The increasing automobiles in developing countries posing a dangerous threat to ambience.it is inevitable that underdeveloping countries have more population than developed countries. Thus it leads to more emission of carbon dioxide and pollutes the environment. Numerous people have gotten respiratory problems like asthma, heart diseases, hypertension because of polluted air. for instance when in Delhi the emergency was announced on pollution then odd and even method was implemented to curb it. secondly, it also causes noise pollution which occurs with the sound of braks and tyres, irritating horns which supposed to generate the ailments regarding air deafening. finally, even economical developing countries seem not to have proper road infrastructure that leads to road accidents and mishappenings.
Several solutions can be taken to reduce the demand for personal vehicles .first and foremost is to enact the heavy taxes on vehicles to deter buyers.it would create a massive impact on dwellers and environment.for instance, in some developed countries, the automobiles are extravagant that turned people to follow the public transport. next, public transport should be more flexible, economical and accessible.thus people can easily use it and go to their destinations without any obstacles. moreover, people should use carpooling to avoid the excessive traffic jam at roads during peak hours of commuters.
In conclusion,it is firmly clear that major steps should be taken by the government to prevent nature from the devastating consequences, otherwise many dire repercussion could be seen in forthcoming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60130718954 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13389662304 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9610922453 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.846153846 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219909704175 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757666369597 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511783970599 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119022689813 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766878141088 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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