More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
In today’s digital age, people tend to increasingly get news through Internet instead of newspapers or TV channels. From my observation, I believe that this trend can be considered with advantagous growth or disadvantagous one. While I accept that using Internet-connected devices to read news can bring people several benefits, it still is considered a negative development for numerous reasons.
On the one hand, geting news through Internets can offer people convenient experiences and save money. Initially, people can easy to stay update with current news and affairs all over the world with a tap on the screen, whenever and wherever they want. It is more convenient than other ways as its flexibility, instead of information are just printed on newspapers or on air in TV in particular time in a day. Moreover, people can also save money, especially people who are budget-conscious, by reading news from Internet. For instance, instead of paying money for newspapers everydays, people can read them free when accessing to Wifi or any Internet devices.
On the other hand, Internet also provide several demerits when people use it to get news. Firtsly, in today’s digitial age, increasingly unverified information appears, making people misunderstand about something. In fact, with the availability of Internet, some organizations have posted several wrong information with purpose of undermining government, affects severely to overall country. If people do not have ability of gathering information, they can easy to get the wrong news, affecting their informed decisions. Unlike online news, newspapers and TV programs are more likely trustful as all the sources of information are checked by goverment. Moreover, the tendency of reading news through Internet can make printed news decrease in the amount of production or perhaps cannot maintain in the future, offering disadvantage for older people who do not excel in technology.
In conclusion, Internet can help people stay up-to-date with current affairs across the world in a very convenient way; however, it also offers people several drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 467, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... can also save money, especially people who are budget-conscious, by reading news from ...
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Line 3, column 819, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cannot maintain in the future, offering disadvantage for older people who do not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46646341463 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08265178757 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3830707697 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.533333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36612767598 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134043009411 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720991156702 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223616492084 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082836372408 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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