Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about whether reading books or watching TV and play online game is better for kids. While I agree that reading stories from a book brings essential benefits for children, I still believe that the latter also plays a key role on the developments of them.
The habit of reading books in children can greatly benefit them in their growing process. Initially, not to mention, reading books regularly can affect to language development in children effectively. Reading helps children build a strong vocabulary and language skill. Exposure to a variety of words and sentence structures in books can greatly enhance their ability to communicate. In addition, concentration and perseverance can also be improved due to the require of focus and attention, which are valuable skills for academic success.
On the other hand, other activities such as watching TV or playing games on computers also help children in their development. Although books can enhance knowledge in children through beautiful words and stories, televisions can also provide numerous educational programs and chanels which are designed specifically for kids. These contents can make learning fun and engageing, and introduce kids to a wide range of topics, from science and history to art and geography. Furthermore, playing computer games may be one the way that help children relax and entertain after a day of diligent studying. Many rerearches have shown that playing game also boosts creactivity in children. For example, kids can build their own cities according their imagination.
To sum up, reading can be a great way to develop several aspects in the growing process of children, but watching TV or playing computer games can be equally important for different reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...erseverance can also be improved due to the require of focus and attention, which are valua...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fun'
Suggestion: to fun
... kids. These contents can make learning fun and engageing, and introduce kids to a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32028469751 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79938425765 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0935131401 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321708780973 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121016038895 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889165060513 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231880550831 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112203018547 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.