More and more people these days work harder and longer hours and have no time for family life and friends. What are the causes in your opinion for this? How is it affecting family life and society as a whole?
People nowadays are dedicating more time and energy to their workplaces, which reduce their time for their loved ones. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this and the impacts of the movement.
There are two main explanations why workers are more dilligent and work more hours than the past. The first cause is that the labor market has become increasingly competitive in recent years. Given the applications of new technological breakthroughs, working individuals are at greater risk of being eliminated from their positions. If people do not enhance their productivity and dedication to their jobs, they will be replaced with younger job holders, who are more tech-savvy and familiar with using state-of-the-art equipment or software. The upsurge in cost of living is another contributor to the increase of working hours and effort of wage-earners. The quality of products and services has witnessed significantly improvement. This goes hand in hand with the price of the offerings. This means that people have to spend more money to buy goods that makes them invest more resources to receive additional income.
The shift in people working time and attitude have negative implications on their family and social connections. It is thought that the phenomenon leads to less quality family time among working people. This prevents them from bonding with their loved ones and rearing their children, which deprive individuals of a sense of family solidarity. Another effect from longer working hours and hard-work is that it would discourage people to get involved in conservations with other individuals. Lack of communication is detrimental to one’s social life. Workers, who spend long hours at work would experience unsufficient time to socialize. The phenomenon in the long term would take a toll on people’s ability to maintain and establish meaningful relationships with others, as a result, people will eventually become socially isolated and even anti-social.
In sum, employees may experience deterioration of family and social relationships, which caused by competition at work and changes in material wealth in modern society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45209580838 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02572575008 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7720219626 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267018043047 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796866188571 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511366103145 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149342207406 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391656106348 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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