Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Do you agree or disagree.
Whether knowledge from internet is trustworthy has been a topic of broad interest to the general public. In my opinion, this statement is partly true as the amount of info released for the course of time is enormous, and measurability of it is a complicated issue.
On the one hand, with the invent of internet and smart devices, the volumes of information to comprehend is massive. Thus, disinformation such as spam and false news increasingly stem from this phenomenon. The main culprits of this is either threat of personal information being stolen by hackers in cyber attacks or even misleading the public which serves for political purposes. In any circumstances, this may feed internet users with inaccurate claims that would place ones at risk of falling into victim of private security violence or it may cloud their judgement which is the precursor of subsequent political biases.
On the other hand, even though there are pitfalls associated with internet usage, merits of the platform are numerous including a wide range of sources of reliable knowledge and faithful info. One prime example is that ted.com a prevalent website which specializes in supplying unique perspectives and innovative ideas from experts regarding many subjects. Besides, some manipulation could enable internet users to secure themselves from harms while being online which are avoiding clickbait or harness of antivirus browser. In the light of these facts, it is apparent that the impacts of internet upon its users have both advantages and drawbacks. However, there are no instruments which are able to measure how much proportion of the information broadcast are trustful or not for the time being. This may rest on one’s educational background and ability to discriminate between sources which those facts originated from.
In sum, technological advancements have both motivated negative and positive trends in the deployment of internet. Therefore, it is uncertain to claim that the majority of information is fallacy.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether knowledge from internet is trustworthy ...
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Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...s been a topic of broad interest to the general public. In my opinion, this statement is partl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mplicated issue. On the one hand, with the invent of internet and smart devices, the volu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33962264151 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93604953156 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4191908822 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138053381682 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491089637332 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278631340455 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836974073486 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107198201613 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether knowledge from internet is trustworthy ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...s been a topic of broad interest to the general public. In my opinion, this statement is partl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mplicated issue. On the one hand, with the invent of internet and smart devices, the volu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33962264151 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93604953156 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4191908822 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138053381682 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491089637332 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278631340455 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836974073486 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107198201613 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.