In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
Some people tend to dedicate more time and energy for studying and working. There are several mechanisms behind the phenomenon that certain individuals working more dilligently than their counterparts. However, it is sometimes not beneficial for people, who always spend more resources working.
Hard-working are of great importance when it comes to achieving wealth, fame and relieving pressure from like-minded people. First, money is common inducement among stundents or working individuals. This is especially the case for those who are originated from inprivileged background. By studying or working harder, the less well-off stand a higher chance to shake off poverty and live better off. If students study well at school, they may be able to gain college or university certificates that opens up many employment opportunities. Likewise, hard-working staff would be creditted by coleagues and climb high in career ladder. These are indicators of decent income in future. Additionally, being known by people is one of intrinsic factors that encourages learners, employees to work more. Apart from food, shelter, sex, and other demands, attaining popularity is an intergral part of human's instinct, which gives people a sense of fulfillment. Finally, it is common that people might devote extra effort for their performance simply because they do not want to be left behind by their peers. Given peer pressure become increasing popular due to widespread of social media, some people are afraid of being compared to others, thereby investing additional attempts in work or study.
Even though hard-working is highly valued in most case, there are still occasions, when presentation of this characteristic may backfire. To illustrate, while wage-earners try to spend more time at workplaces thus finish deadlines on time, they may be assigned more tasks. In this case, working hard in toxic working environment is not good decision.
In sum, financial resources, desire to be known and stress to follow others are elements that make persons learn and work harder and endevours may be wasted in special circumstances.
- It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- There have been many inventions in the human history such as the wheel Some people think the most important thing is the internet To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 59
- Art classes should be compulsory in high school Do you agree or disagree 74
- The expansion of multinational companies and increase in globalization produce positive effects to everyone To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born What is your opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 671, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
.... These are indicators of decent income in future. Additionally, being known by people is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, still, thus, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46200607903 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9301447863 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656534954407 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2964434143 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33917316329 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951275008632 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694345399195 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181416536971 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565962085226 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.