More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, people have a tendency to purchase high-end items at expensive prices. It seems to me that there could be two main culprits, leading to this trend, and the result of this includes positive and negative effects.

There are two main reasons resulting in this tendency. Firstly, it is obvious that the social status of a person in the modern world is usually considered by material values. In other words, a person putting on well-known designer clothes or owning an exorbitant car could demonstrate their glamorous and successful lifestyle. As a result, more and more people make an effort to purchase these items. Secondly, since the economy has developed, the demand of people in the quality of life also increases, which leads to finding products could satisfy theirs requires, in terms of quality. It is clear that products originating from prominent brands will have high quality, which enables customers to be more comfortable and convenient.

Besides that, this trend also has positive and negative influences on social life. On the one hand, the increasing number of high-end products would make a huge contribution to help these companies maximize their profits and enlarge the scale of activities, which results in the development of the economy and the creation of more job opportunities. On the other hand, this trend could have adversely affected on the perception of people, especially the young generation. They could consider that materials would be the real value in life and ignore other valuable things, such as family or friendship, which could be a detrimental effect.

In conclusion, the reasons leading to this trend could be diverse and different. In addition, this could have not only positive but also negative influences.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22105263158 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74013297424 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8988401796 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164257742945 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612485118823 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544672765672 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993329071874 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399384063278 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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