More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, car and other items. Why is it? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The number of people pay money on consumption goods such as clothes, cars and others which belong to well-known brands have increased. There are many causes of this issues, but 2 main factors are a high quality of goods and an effective of companies' marketing. The issue as to whether people should purchase items with a large name remains controversial; however, I am afraid that this development will demolish a local and small companies in socio-economic development.
On the one hand, the high quality of products is priority of consumers. The famous companies have a long history in these fields are often viewed as a guarantee for the qualifications. Even though the products from these companies seem to be prohibitively expensive, consumers gravitate towards the famous brands. Not only does it has the high-quality but also it is a leading of the fashion hot-trends. As an old saying goes: "Fine feather make fine birds." It indicates that an appearance play a crucial role in the modern life. On the other hand, to compete with other companies, for the large companies pay the considerable money for marketing and advertising. Needless to say, the larger companies are, the much more money is investment to attract more consumers. Therefore, people have had more orders to buy the large brands is understandable.
This development created a giant barrage for local and small companies. Furthermore, if the government does not have an economic policy to keep a balance of trade, the market will become a playground of famous brands that are going to monopolies in the following years. Indeed, anecdotal evidence showed that a lot of local companies have a problem when they compete with larger companies. For example, the well-known brands usually have a great deal for new customers while the smaller companies does not enough finance to follow-up their competitors. Thus, in the long-term, this issue will show a dark side of the rising consumers buy famous brands.
In brief, the high quality of goods and the marketing, advertising strategies play a pivotal role to promote the profit of companies through gravitate more consumers. However, "the coin has two sides", the local and small companies can be disappearance unless the government have a correct policies to monitor the market. I completely believe that a smart consumers will have a precise decision to purchase products as the way to keep a survival of local brands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in brief, in fact, such as, i am afraid, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16458852868 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97087141295 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511221945137 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0611841594 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144100835596 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048575285997 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059605159555 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088420647248 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418291493699 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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