More and more students choose to go to another country for higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems?
In my opinion, there's nothing wrong with students go to another country for higher education, because however, education is the biggest thing that we have to reach. There are many benefits if we have a high education. Trust from society, respect from others, and well paid job for sure. With well paid job, of course we can earn much money that we can use for many things, such as buying home for ourselves and family, shopping, eating delicious food, buying trending things, and much more.
Back to the topic, go to another country for study has both advantages and disadvantages. Let's talk about the advantages first. By study in another country, we can learn new culture and for me, it's kinda interesting for knowing other's culture. Not only that, we can also learn about socialization in new society, we have to be able to be a sociable person there so we can have friends. Besides that, of course by having higher education we can learn about manner and respect for other, and we can receive it as well.
But on the other hand, study in another country usually makes people have less comunication with society on their own country, especially with their family. In foreign country, we have to learn everything on our own, and we have to socialize with new society and culture. Also, we have to be smart enough with our money so we won't throw it on useless things, instead we can have it to pay our tuition fees and our needs. The most important thing is, our family trust us for leaving them for our better future, it means of course we shouldn't break their trusts and it's a heavy thing that we always have to keep in our mind.
In conclusion, everything must have an advantages and disadvantages, it all back at our thoughts, will we choose the positive one or the negative one. In this case, as i've said before, i agree with people who study in another country for higher education. Because education is really improtant for both our present and our future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, really, so, well, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63817663818 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40485881382 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4492739012 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150539569345 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666079334919 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636506706869 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112768815702 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545195233627 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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