More big shopping malls are being built and they replace small shops. Is this a positive or negative development?
More and more big shopping malls are being built and replaced small shops. While this tendency brings about several advantages, I would argue that its drawbacks are much more serious.
On the one hand, there are some significant benefits of building malls as a replacement for small stores. Firstly, huge shopping malls can provide customers with more varieties of brands and products than small shops do. This allows consumers to have more options in order to purchase the most suitable items. Secondly, companies need to hire more people to work at the malls such as staffs or cashiers, which provides individuals with job opportunities and helps reducing the unemployment rate.
On the other hand, I believe that this trend can bring about several serious disadvantages. First, in order to run shopping malls, companies have to pay more fees for workers such as managers or securities, which contributes to the price increasing. This means when shopping at the malls, customers have to purchase the same products but in higher prices than shopping at small stores. As a result, a large amount of money might become wasteful. Additionally, overcrowding is also a common problem in shopping malls, especially in holiday seasons. This might lead to the shortage of parking spaces and negatively affect consumers’ shopping experiences.
In conclusion, while replacing small stores with big shopping malls can bring about some real benefits, I strongly believed that its drawbacks are way more intense.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...iduals with job opportunities and helps reducing the unemployment rate. On the other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30833333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75151473435 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0922705965 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429918111499 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157638321964 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15012336871 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285746947484 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731583269521 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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