More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, there is a significant increase in the growth rate of the population. This has led the public to explore the idea of starting a family at a later age than in the past. The benefits that of this move far outweigh its drawbacks for number of reasons.
Wanting children has been the ultimate desire of every couple. This is because having an offspring is their right as it provides happiness to them. It is already printed in the minds in every family that they can survive this turn-around of events in the long term even if they are still going to build their own careers. This is evident in most of the families in the Philippines where any couple can start their own jubilant family as early as 16 or 15 years old. However, this joy may lead to inevitable crisis as soon as the young ones starts to grow up. Sooner or later, they begin to realize that having children at an early age is detrimental as this leads them to experience financial issues.
Those who chose to begin having a family at a later period see that they want to focus more on their career and be an achiever in every aspect in the fast pace of life. This is because having to conceive children will hinder their success and will cause them to fail. Apart from this, they also want to ensure that they have a stable future which is why they want to save as much as they can. Most of the professional employees see this as a good move to ensure their partners and children do not to suffer the consequences being negligent making life choices. As they progress, they soon find out that they are capable enough to handle the issues related to starting a unit of their own.
By and large, the advantages of starting a family at a later age clearly outweighs the disadvantages. Not only that these provide people enough time for them to be successful, these also help them to save up for a stable future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 690, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elated to starting a unit of their own. By and large, the advantages of starting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, apart from, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45244956772 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35720073097 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527377521614 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8025054545 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291513363747 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957742885711 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640708873094 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167510251473 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279299554897 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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