More robots are being used at home and work place. Do you think this is a negative or positive trend?
Nowadays, world’s full with modern technologies which provide comfortable living to humans and robots are one of them. However, a majority of robots are utilise at home and offices to assist humans. I think it is a bright side because robots are help people in households works to do quickly and useful in work places for preserving data and other works.
The main advantage of robots working at home is that in today’s era everyone is busy in their life to achieve goals as well as they do more work to earn more money for their better future due to this human have shortage of time for domestic work, so, machines like vacuum cleaner are beneficial to clean house within minutes. In addition to this, microwave, refrigerator and so on are useful to cook food faster and preserve meals fresh for long time. In another words, mixer grander, air conditioner and etcetera have own benefits for masses. For example, a report by newspaper shows that majority of people in Canada use robots in their household works due to lack of timing.
The another major benefit of robots to assist in offices, hospitals, restaurants and so on. The reason is that in office have large data which are not be easy for humans to keep stores in mind that is why computer is using to preserve data as open it within seconds when they needs. Moreover, there are many advance machines which are being using in hospitals for treatment of various ailments as well as these machines easily find the disease of patients and helps doctors to work quickly. Apart from that, a different types of robots are utilise in various fields to help humans and give relaxation to them. For example, in Kolkata,in July 2019 a local restaurant is open where robots are using in forms of waiters to serve food to customers and there robots can easily do their tasks, all the customers happy with this services.
In conclusion, robots are the greatest invention of science which make by scientists for assist masses in their busy schedule in house and work places and its better for humans to provide relaxation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'utilised'.
Suggestion: utilised
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'type'?
Suggestion: type
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'utilised'.
Suggestion: utilised
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Suggestion: , in
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7728531856 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45404349569 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537396121884 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0367734462 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.538461538 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275081855636 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971212980222 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700147066696 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175509000364 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642798922739 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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