Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures. This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well.
A large number of prosperous nations invest most of their health revenues in modern medical techniques and machines. However, there exists a rising viewpoint that these budgets would be more effectively utilized if they were spent more on propagandizing health knowledge to residents. From my perspective of view, maintaining the harmonization between these two methods proves to create lucrative and positive impacts.
On the one hand, medication and other technology play a leading role to support humans' survival, both individually and communally. Thanks to sophisticated medical procedures, serious diseases can be cured more rapidly and less exorbitantly than in the past. Medical practitioners are even able to diagnose the illness accurately using imaging techniques, which help them provide proper treatment and prescribe right tablets for their patients instead of causing them to pay for eliminating wrong detection.
On the other hand, the allotted budget ought to go to health education as well. If people are concerned about their physical states, they will design disciplines to keep a sustainable lifestyle, which prevents many health issues such as obesity, constant insomnia, or even Alzheimer. They also grasp enough wisdom and knowledge to avoid and boycott negative trends such as anti-vaccine. Governments can achieve national health awareness by broadcasting more about health, bad and good habits, and cutting the charge of public sports centres and hospitals.
In conclusion, balancing between these two vital fields is the only way to guarantee the development of a country's medical care.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of prosperous nations invest most of their...
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Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...chnology play a leading role to support humans survival, both individually and communa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62704918033 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95349093571 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696721311475 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7748713048 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.818181818 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274312231284 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892434056976 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645795020368 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134721197082 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452695044877 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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