Most people agree that money cannot bring happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
With the increasing value of money around the world, a lot of people believe that earning adequate amount of money doesn’t always mean happiness. This essay will discuss the reason why happiness is hard to define and the ways people can achieve happiness.
The term happiness entirely depends upon the needs of an individual. That Is to mean, different people have different needs and desires which makes it difficult to describe happiness. Furthermore, the needs of a person change as per their age. Hence, it is not always easy to define happiness as it changes according to a person’s interest and age. For instance, a child gains happiness upon receiving toys while the same child when becomes an adult, earning money may become the major reason behind his/her happiness. So happiness is often difficult for us to define.
One of the ways people can have happiness is through job satisfaction. If a person has a good working environment and receives good amount of remuneration, this leads to job satisfaction. As a result, people tends to be more satisfied and happy. Secondly, family also plays a vital role in order to gain happiness. When parents consider and fulfills an individual’s desires, they feel pleased and become happy. And at last, being socially active also tends to bring happiness among people. People become more happy when they can help other people and solve social problems. To illustrate this, a doctor may fell more special upon treating patients for free.
In conclusion, it is proven that happiness is difficult to define because of the evolving needs of people. However, one can gain happiness through factors like job satisfaction, family support and making contributions in a society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1554770318 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82241258691 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544169611307 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7960320531 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0555555556 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38810237036 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118185895649 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979955725458 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245113469893 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678837289761 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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