Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In contemporary the world, there has been the biggest problem about population in the world more and more rocket increase and human need to face it. While it is caused by family planning and is a cause serious problem, humans need to solve this thing. From my perspective, I agree that the issue of population is the greatest problem faced by humanity and in this essay will be explored within the explanation.
First of all, the cause led to the population still counting increase that people do not have any family planning and have not the method to solved them. For example, some families want to have more children to makes fun for their family. Furthermore, in some countries the government will pay for foster care for families who have a child, so parents also nurture their children. Additonally, overpopulation partly by demand for labor rises then some governments encounrage families need to have more children.
Undountedly, when i agree that the biggest issues that faced by humanity. Because, overpopulation will impact on the environment. For example, population inceases then accomodation need to rises and expand more, so human will cutting down trees, demolished the ground to build new houses. Morover, use goods more and more growth follow the population while these thing make climate will changes, led to lack of feshwater on the global. Then climate change will effect people health. Furthermor, overpopulation will led to lack of jobs for human, lack of accomdations.
In conclusion, the essay above explores countinuing overpopulation in the world is the greatest problem people need to faced that. In my opinion, I strongly agree that human must to face this issues and find out the solutions to slove this thing.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... have more children. Undountedly, when i agree that the biggest issues that face...
^
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... biggest issues that faced by humanity. Because, overpopulation will impact on the envi...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cut'
Suggestion: cut
...to rises and expand more, so human will cutting down trees, demolished the ground to bu...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...more growth follow the population while these thing make climate will changes, led to lack ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...ion while these thing make climate will changes, led to lack of feshwater on the global...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...on the global. Then climate change will effect people health. Furthermor, overpopulati...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...health. Furthermor, overpopulation will led to lack of jobs for human, lack of acco...
^^^
Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...my opinion, I strongly agree that human must to face this issues and find out the solut...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08362369338 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78692068022 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522648083624 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9988588413 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111649563375 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440929622737 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431860259169 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743125937077 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305514208437 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... have more children. Undountedly, when i agree that the biggest issues that face...
^
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... biggest issues that faced by humanity. Because, overpopulation will impact on the envi...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cut'
Suggestion: cut
...to rises and expand more, so human will cutting down trees, demolished the ground to bu...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...more growth follow the population while these thing make climate will changes, led to lack ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...ion while these thing make climate will changes, led to lack of feshwater on the global...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...on the global. Then climate change will effect people health. Furthermor, overpopulati...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...health. Furthermor, overpopulation will led to lack of jobs for human, lack of acco...
^^^
Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...my opinion, I strongly agree that human must to face this issues and find out the solut...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08362369338 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78692068022 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522648083624 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9988588413 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111649563375 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440929622737 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431860259169 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743125937077 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305514208437 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.